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We sat under those stars,
As the moon was meant to rise,
But It didnt,
for want of a smile.
Was the moon wrong for not giving
to your wants, if you would not succumb to its.
"When you gonna love you as much as I do?"

Dust filled our mouths as we kissed
under the moonless nights.
You said you were happy.
But I see the cobwebs in your smile.
and the tear stains on your pillows.
Can you love me perfectly,
When you obsess over her obsession?

I try and splash your world in colour,
But all you see is shades of blue,
Who's to blame for your blindness,
Surely not me,her

Lost and bleeding in your heart,
Can you lead me any further,
Or shall I stay here,
To suffer in your unhappiness,
Forever?

The bright comet pierced the moonless night,
as you pulled away, like you did,
At all the wrong times,
But I stayed, For want of a smile.
I'll make the moon rise.
Maybe I have enough smiles for both of us.
Or maybe I'll learn to live without the moon,
Again.
But at least I have the stars,
I CAN make them shine brighter,
For you,
us.
©2007-2009 ~Lillith-Sweetblood
:iconlillith-sweetblood:

Author's Comments

Im writing it now, raw, uncut as the words form inside my mind.

the sub/italisized words are quotes from a Tori Amos song, "Winter"

the song Im singing right now.

I sing it alot.

Any questions feel free to comment, note me.
And any comments are appreciated.
even if I cant spell that a-word right.

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:icondrwombat:
It's a beautiful picture you paint here. Very sad, but yet...

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...Both did an excellent job of using the powers of illusion to disturb and confound sexy pubescent girls. But I'll give the edge to the cat, as interspecies pedophilia is a bit less creepy when in cartoon form.
:iconlillith-sweetblood:
it ends, ended happily.

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What? Oh I was just gonna go to the incinerator room. Y'know? Burn in the blessed flames of death.
:icondrwombat:
Happiness... Good.

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...Both did an excellent job of using the powers of illusion to disturb and confound sexy pubescent girls. But I'll give the edge to the cat, as interspecies pedophilia is a bit less creepy when in cartoon form.
:iconlillith-sweetblood:
usually.

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What? Oh I was just gonna go to the incinerator room. Y'know? Burn in the blessed flames of death.
:icondrwombat:
When isn't it? ^_^

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...Both did an excellent job of using the powers of illusion to disturb and confound sexy pubescent girls. But I'll give the edge to the cat, as interspecies pedophilia is a bit less creepy when in cartoon form.
:icondancing-naked:
I love this ... I keep reading it x
:iconlillith-sweetblood:
:)

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What? Oh I was just gonna go to the incinerator room. Y'know? Burn in the blessed flames of death.
:iconlillith-sweetblood:
occassionally.

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What? Oh I was just gonna go to the incinerator room. Y'know? Burn in the blessed flames of death.
:icondrwombat:
Yes....yes it can..

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...Both did an excellent job of using the powers of illusion to disturb and confound sexy pubescent girls. But I'll give the edge to the cat, as interspecies pedophilia is a bit less creepy when in cartoon form.

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